COTTON CANDY
Once upon a time, there was a village named Kg. Talam. At the end of the village lived one small family that consists of Goku, The Flash, Naruto, Batman, and Shin Chan. Goku is the one that is responsible to take care of the family since their parents had passed away. As Shin Chan is the youngest in the family, he has to stay alone at home when the entire eldest left for work.
On one fine day, while the entire eldest were at work, Shin Chan suddenly had thought of something. He got an idea to kidnap Sweetie, the daughter of Kg. Talam’s JKK. At the night, he told Batman about his plan. Batman was so shocked when he heard about Shin Chan’s idea and scolded him.
Shin Chan however didn’t listen to Batman. The next day, after all the eldest left for work, he went out too carry out his plan. He managed to kidnap Sweetie by himself and had brought her to the cave near his house. As soon as Batman reached home that evening, he realized that Shin Chan was not at home. He then told the others about Shin Chan’s plan and they started to look for Shin Chan.
After an hour of searching, they managed to find Shin Chan. They asked Shin Chan to let go of Sweetie but he refused. Goku and Naruto then decided to use their power to fight Shin Chan. They were fighting. Though Shin Chan was able to escape from Goku and Naruto’s attack, but The Flash managed to catch him. When being asked of why Shin Chan had done that, the only reason that he gave was he wanted to give Sweetie a cotton candy………
The story is quite plain but it has a cute ending though. Fighting part was not elaborated enough to show the climax of the story. You guys can improve your writing by doing some more brainstorming with each others. Good work!
ReplyDeleteWhen I first read this story, I found that it was quite strange when Shin Chan, a part of the 'superhero' clan, turned an antagonist character. But, after a thorough reading, I finally understand that I should have not jumped into conclusion before getting the real point.
ReplyDeletehahahaha.....nice story...firstly we think that it will be a serious fighting between shin chan and batman..but at the end..shin chan just wanna give sweetie a cotton candy..!!!!
ReplyDeleteYou can improve more on your pronunciation. However that a good presentation because have a lot of examples and we can understand clearly. :)
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